Response to Inna's blog

I agree that using these revising tools from the chapter will be useful for our individual papers. I also never really thought about reading the paper from the audiences perspective. I typically tend to focus on getting my point across as well, however, maybe not always in the most concise way. I now can see how letting time pass before revising again is important. After reading and re-reading you tend to miss errors. I was writing a reading analysis for my history class this past week and when I was revising it I kept getting hung up on certain sentences. I immediately remembered from the readings that if you can't read the paper, you audience probably wont be able to either. So I took some time to make it flow easier and I think that because of that my paper will have a better outcome.